Feena's 10fanfic reviews

Batman


-This blog is about the proposal of batman to his fiance Barbara Gordan. Very good storyline and an interesting intervention between batmans love for his fiance aswell as batgirls mission of finding out batmans weakness. Although, it would have been better if there were more narrative parts so that the audience could get a more visual picture of batmans proposal.




Matrix - Survival


-Author uses rhetorical questions to capture audiences attention and to keep the audience guessing what's gonna happen next. I think the writer has a unique storyline and a very creative jist to the story.



Transformers- Not so Different



- Starts the storyline off with an autobiography typed narration which I think is unique.
A few correction errors but has a relevantly good storyline about the transforming robots.



Final Destination - The Fair



-One of my favourite series of movies. I love the storyline inwhich the writer creates. Quite a few spelling errors. I get a clear picture of what's going on in the story so very clear narrations and convo's going on in the story.



Paranormal Activity - Trouble with a Demon


- Love the humour put into this storyline. Ashame that the writer didn't create more action or thrill in the story. Very humourous, fun and creativce but I recommend the writer to have written more .



The Grudge - The new neighbour

- Very short, good points and storyline. Could work on the paragraphs to make them longer. Sounds like a real horror and thriller! :)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5186757/1/The_Trouble_with_Kevin_A_Home_Alone_2_Fan_fic

- One of my favourite movies . I find it quite humorous where Kevin slips into the hotel or shall I say one of the finest hotels in New York without realizing the card Kevin used to get into the hotel was stolen. I particularly liked how Kevin always sends each of his family members on a jmission to find him. It’s almost like where’s wally?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5745229/1/Your_Next - Scream

Firstly, the sentences that are immensely short would have been better if they were extended. Very clear detail of what’s happening in the story, yet too many short sentences that could have been made into long sentences. The writer could have made the story longer and perhaps come up with more action, drama or conflict to make the story more appealing to the audience. A few correction errors and punctuation that could’ve been cleared up. Besides these few things a very interesting story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5746289/1/A_Not_So_Typical_Day_in_Zombieland - Zombieland

Started off well and sounded interesting but needs more storylines, a whole chapter atleast. Itching to find out what was going to happen next. A thrilling and intense start yet more could be written in this story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4619689/1/End_of_All - The Neverending Story

One of my favourite movies as a child so was eager to read the fanfic of this story. More needed to be written to extend the story and capture the audience with what would’ve happened next. A creative and interesting start. Now needs a structured ending.