Dom review fanfic

When the Delinquents sigh - based on anime series Cromartie High School

This fanfic follows a few of the main characters studying at another's home. The author has done well in this fanfic, has accurately kept relationships between main characters and followed a storyline that could closely parallel that of the original. What's interesting is that, the author seemed to give himself a 'handicap' while writing the fanfic. Having a friend suggest 3 words to be included in the storyline. Even if it didn't entirely fit they were integrated very well. Perhaps a little more development in story would serve well but overall good effort.


Invulnerable - based on manga/anime series Dragon Ball Z

The fanfic is based in the DBZ world but adds a new element, a nuclear attack. It follows few of the main characters at the instant before and during the first nuclear strike. Overall not much happened in this 1st chapter but the in depth description of the events hold your attention well. Characters relationships and reactions are typical of that of the series and adds more to the validity of the fanfic. I would much like to read any follow up chapters as, so far, the story has potential to be very interesting. Though the problem is with the length but further chapters are discussed in the authors notes.

the rise of skynet - based on Terminator movie

An alternative story on how skynet became and rose to dominate humanity. Honestly, i didn't understand fully the development of the plot. It seemed to be poorly thought out and, even more so executed. Kept me entertained with poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation but other than that the story had next to no connection to the Terminator series. Perhaps if the author explained the relevance of assassinating JFK or as through what method skynet was able to become the president other than "because ir make things bettar". With a bit more effort the story could have been believable 'ish' but as is, not so much.

300: Alternative Ending - based on movie 300

A story setting up an alternate ending to the film. Tells of the Spartan army as they rally themselves to support the king who s already at "Hells gates". Much to my surprise the author well researched names and aspects of the Spartans. Showing a base knowledge of the background ideas and themes add much to the authenticity of the fanfic. Showing, not just the action, but touching on reasons for them being disallowed and predicting the reaction by parties involved showed much thought into the plot. I may not fully agree with the 'happy ending' this is setting up but still a very good example of a fan fiction.